Showing posts with label narrative. Show all posts
Showing posts with label narrative. Show all posts

Thursday, 30 May 2019

The Beast

When I was walking through the forest, I saw a creature that tried to eat me so I carefully looked from behind the tree and saw a tall creature standing in the shallow creek.

I took a bow and arrow too. The bow was in my bag and the arrows was in my backpack. I shot the monster and he fell into the shallow water.

Then the hideous beast got up. He said “RRRR” and I quickly ran fast down the forest to get away

After I found a cabin and I hid in the cabin I got my knife ready to kill him if I needed too. When he found me, I stabbed him in the back of his neck and the monster was finally killed.

I went back to my car and I breathed in and out slowly. I rode back to my home and drank milo.

Friday, 17 May 2019

My short story about Fire Head

A long long time ago there was a villain named Fire Head. He would rob banks and he would take lollies from kids and make them cry. His real name is Jake. 

He was good until his mum and dad were killed in a robbery. He decided he wants to kill who killed his parents and once he killed the man who did the bad deed, he became evil and that's how he became a bad guy.

He tried to be good but no chance. He saw an old lady that was trying to run but she tripped. 

When Fire Head shot all around them, he saw the old lady and it was his grandma. He said grandma “what are you doing here?”. “I’m shopping” said his grandma.  “Why are you evil?” she said. Fire Head replied “someone killed my parents”. “But why do you have to be evil? C’mon I know you’re good” said his grandma. “Fine, I’ll change” said Jake.

Jake realised that he didn’t have to change, just because someone hurt him and his family.

 So Jake put everything back to normal and lived happily ever after.