One night I was out walking then saw a house on a hill. I went to check it out. It looked haunted and spooky.
I went and rang the bell but the door was already open. I crept inside then felt eerie. I went up stairs and opened a door then bats flew at me. It was terrifying and it was so dark and cold it was so scary too.
I was lonely. I knew I wasn't allowed here, it was too dangerous and creepy. Upstairs was so foggy, it was frightening. When I went outside, I saw misty fog on the grass. It was so gloomy.
I didn't know what was going on. It was mysterious.
Kia Orana Zion
ReplyDeleteI've enjoyed reading your amazing spooky story. My favourite part was the second paragraph, it was so descriptive.
Hello Zion.
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed your story about a spooky house and how dark and foggy it is. I also like how you used different and hard words in your short story. Keep on blogging and keep up the great work.
By Zoin
Hey there Zion, Great work. I really liked your spooky writing. I also really enjoyed reading it. Keep up the good work and keep blogging.
ReplyDeleteRichie
Hey Zion I like your work about Spooky writingn Keep on blogging and Work about what is happening to New Zealand
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